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okay just an update because i finished being picky about the details <3

the detail pictures: [link]
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for one of the nieces of *BLDRDSH :heart:
this pair is for the other: [link]

acrylic on converse canvas.

see other custom shoes by me: [link]

see some info on custom shoes by me: [link]

Critiques


:iconderzorvadur:
I was not sure whether writing a comment or a critic but you requested for a critic and I thought it'd be fair to give one even though this tecnique is not quite close to what I do in art, I guess I will give you my critic from the costumer's point of view.

I obviously love your designs because they are very you, I mean you input your personality and your style in everything you do and that makes it so your own, but I guess I'll speak about the colors, am not sure if the shoes were that dark base color at first or if you painted it, but I think that the dark background makes the whole image lose itself, I think that you should have tried to use more contrasted colors that helped you stand out the first image from the background, so that it would look a little more full of live, what I mean is that maybe a lighter background paint or shoe base would have helped to appreciate much more the design of the shoe itself, although I love the design I think that the shoe color just doesn't make it for me.

but Hey you are an amazing artist am just talking from a viewer's eyes *hugs*
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:iconenchanted-nightshade:
I am new to this critique thingymobob aswell, but it seems pretty cool, a very good idea! There are rating options at the side...

I love these :) definately all 5*

You should give the butterflys some shadows that would look really cool!

I believe this gets sent to you for review first, delete it if you wish :P I was just curious :D

...Ahh.. so a critique has to be at lease 100 words for it to be posted, that makes sense! Otherwise it would just be a comment lol. And Im just writing this in to make it to 100 haha!
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:iconfallenstrawberry:
glitter. lol

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:iconartificialheartache:
loves it!

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And this is who I am when, when I don't know myself anymore.
And this is how it looks when I am standing on the edge. And this is how I break apart when I finally hit the ground. And this is how it hurts when I, pretend I don't feel any pain.
:iconlolitaagogo:
glitter pitter patter <3
:iconwolfwaswhispering:
aahhh the colors darling the COLORS. you kill me.

was that red the original? it's so much darker than most pairs i've seen. >:

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I note that it might be preferable to maintain one's sexy than to go to the extra effort of bringing sexy back.
:iconartificialheartache:
u b welcome.

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And this is who I am when, when I don't know myself anymore.
And this is how it looks when I am standing on the edge. And this is how I break apart when I finally hit the ground. And this is how it hurts when I, pretend I don't feel any pain.
:iconlolitaagogo:
yes isnt it a gorgeous burgundy? i fell in love the instant i saw them and had to work with it. <3
:iconjillebeancolbert:
nice, those butterflies are fantastic
i love the colors and the tree trunks too

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I feel like and inside out peach in a microwave....
(in other words, warm and fuzzy inside)
:iconwolfwaswhispering:
AGH! I just gave my mother the last of all the money I had to buy me wonderful things on her trip to Japan. *sob*
she won't reply to my e-mails... she took the money and ran...

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I note that it might be preferable to maintain one's sexy than to go to the extra effort of bringing sexy back.
:iconemeraldsugar:
I am so inlove with these shoes! :giggle:

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Apr 18, 2009, 4:00:04 PM

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